“Thank you Emma for all your feedback – it’s really useful. A lot of what you said was there in a small corner of my mind but I ignored it due to be essentially quite lazy. It’s given me a good push into reshaping the book and focusing on the narrative. It’s also really helpful to see where I’m speaking and not the character- again I kind of knew this was the case so it’s taught me to listen to my instincts and not be so slapdash and easily pleased.”