“Thank you Emma for going an extra mile for me. It is really evident that you dug very deep on my behalf. I am still reflecting on your report, and working out how to move forward.”
“Thank you Emma for all your feedback – it’s really useful. A lot of what you said was there in a small corner of my mind but I ignored it due to be essentially quite lazy. It’s given me a good push into reshaping the book and focusing on the narrative. It’s also really helpful to see where I’m speaking and not the character- again I kind of knew this was the case so it’s taught me to listen to my instincts and not be so slapdash and easily pleased.”
“Asthall was fabulous. Very good contemplative atmosphere with lovely gardens to stroll in and muse on the next chapter! Fiona’s food was excellent. The two speakers were really well chosen…and the whole event very warm and supportive. Thank you Emma.”
When Sara Sarre sent me my report, I never expected it to be so incredibly detailed and helpful. I will be reading and rereading it until I have everything memorised and completely etched in my brain! It is going to be completely invaluable to me. I have so much to learn and she has given me help and guidance which is critical for me to progress and develop. I wanted to read her report several times immediately but sent her a note straight away to say thank you sincerely for taking so much time and trouble. It could not be more appreciated and it goes without saying that everything she said made perfect sense. What a skill she has… I am in absolute awe!
Iain Maloney has reviewed two of my novels and both have been meticulous and hugely helpful. As a newbie writer, he has guided me and educated me in every aspect of writing a novel. Iain showed me why things work and don’t work, and what the industry expects from a story and its characters. He queried plot decisions, suggested alternatives and picked up on things I just forget. Now I am on the way to considering myself a writer. A big thanks to Iain and the team at Blue Pencil. A tricky career change now makes sense.
Sara is a generous hard-working editor who has a strong instinct for story and structure. With all three of my novels, she reached a deep understanding of the characters and honed in on problems with laser precision. From the very beginning of working with her, she supported and encouraged me, which gave me a huge boost. Finding Sara, through Fiona Mitchell’s high recommendation has undoubtedly helped me to secure my agent, Jo Bell at Bell Lomax Moreton.
Oliver’s great gift was to reveal to me all that habit, lack of distance and impatience were preventing me from seeing for myself, and beyond that to come up with simple but inspired suggestions that would never have occurred to me, but whose sharpness and perceptiveness seemed blindingly obvious once I’d had the time to digest them. Honest, patient, supportive and tough throughout the entire process, his contribution to The Madness of Grief could not be overstated.
I contacted Bluepencilagency because I was unable to find an agent willing to represent me. David Simons was assigned as my editor and his report, completed promptly on time as promised, showed me why my story hasn’t received agent interest. I now understand which characters to develop and which scenes need expanding. From the annotations on the manuscript, I also know when to reign myself in and classically ‘show not tell’! However, where Bluepencilagency helped the most, was in returning to me a sense of inspiration and enabling me to reconnect with my characters and story. I am now rewriting with renewed vigour.
I poured my heart and soul into my debut Y/A manuscript Resistance and I knew after the first few rejections that something was off, something that as a new writer I didn’t have the experience to fix. A really kind agent emailed to say I could write but that my package needed work and she suggested Bluepencilagency to me. It was a godsend. Sara gave me some of the best feedback notes I’ve ever had. Remarkable story insight, clear, concise, and professional notes. Exactly what I needed to bring the next draft to a level where it would attract an agent. More importantly, Sara’s comments also gave me the confidence to really go for it when pushing the manuscript out. I have no doubt that the work she did with me is what helped me find an agent. She’s a rare find in a tough competitive industry and I can’t recommend her and the team enough. When it came to seeking representation, both Emma and Sara were very helpful and found me an agent. As it turned out, I was offered representation by Marianne Gunn O’Conner at the same time, but it was their faith that kept me going.
When I first met Oliver I thought I had a novel to discuss with him. I very soon found that what I thought was a novel was really a glorified memoir. In a few short sessions Oliver showed me how to structure a novel, how to plan in the round rather than tailing off in a straight line. He showed me the vitality of dialogue and how to pick out small observations which bring the story to life.