Full Day Workshop with Emma Darwin: Voice, Dialogue and Prose – Bring your Characters and Story to Life
Q&A and Afternoon Tea with Literary Agent: Bookseller Rising Star 2021 – Charlotte Seymour, Johnson & Alcock
The Away Day will have limited numbers of like-minded writers at a similar stage in their writing journey. The event is in a beautiful country house in a garden setting. Costs include lunch and afternoon tea.
Words on the Page: Prose, Voice & Dialogue
You can have a brilliant premise for a story, wonderful characters and a gripping plot – but none of that is any good if the words that you put on the page don’t bring them all to fresh and vivid life. Agents and editors talk about the voice of a novel, but if you want to develop as a writer and sustain your career, you need a wider, deeper, richer understanding of the business of writing prose.
In this practical, all-day workshop led By Emma Darwin, we will dig deep into every aspect of how you choose which words get onto your pages: not only the all-important narrative voice, and characters’ voices and dialogue, but the underlying craft and technical skill which will raise your writing to a new level.
You should leave feeling stretched and inspired, with a notebook full of exciting experiments – some full of potential, some more polished – and a stronger sense of the possibilities that you, personally, want to explore and develop in the future.
Literary Agent Q&A
Over afternoon tea Charlotte Seymour, literary agent and Bookseller Rising Star 2021, will talk about what she is looking for in debuts and will go through the submission process commenting on cover letters and synopses with tips for what to include and what to avoid. She will share her thoughts on industry trends and the commercial side of the business.
In an increasingly competitive market, it’s more important than ever to be well informed and prepared when seeking representation.
Emma’s memoir, This is Not a Book About Charles Darwin, was published in 2019. Her widely-read blog This Itch of Writing gave rise to Get Started in Writing Historical Fiction which publisher Scott Pack describes as ‘essential reading’. She has taught for the Open University and is a regular guest lecturer and workshop leader.
Charlotte began her career in publishing as a literary scout at Eccles Fisher Associates. Following six and a half years as an agent at Andrew Nurnberg Associates, in 2022 she joined Johnson & Alcock, representing fiction and non fiction, and selling UK rights on behalf of US publisher Other Press.
Charlotte represents authors whose works have been Sunday Times and New York Times bestsellers, and won or been nominated for prizes including the Goldsmiths Prize, Northern Book Prize, Dublin Literary Award, White Review Short Story Prize, National Book Awards (US) and PEN America Literary Awards, and international prizes including the Prix Goncourt, Swiss Book Prize and the International Prize for Arabic Fiction.
Charlotte was a Bookseller Rising Star 2021. See here for more about what Charlotte is working on and enjoys reading.
You can find Charlotte on Twitter at @ce_seymour
Emma is responsible for BPA’s bespoke programme of literary events and retreats as well as managing the First Novel Award and Pitch Prize competitions. With a background in communications and special events she has an eye for detail and a desire to give writers the best possible experience in an imaginative programme involving creative writing tutors, best selling authors and leading literary agents as guest tutors.
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Here’s what past clients have said
I would like to thank you for giving me the opportunity to attend the zoom workshop on The Art of Writing Award Winning Short Stories with a bursary place. I would also like to thank Susannah for the invaluable feedback she gave me regarding my short story writing. For many years, I have faced a…
I have been trying to get my novel completed for the last 5 years having started it 10 years ago. Despite re-writes and getting feedback etc I must have been over it more than 30 times. The seminar with Emma Darwin was outstanding. It’s the best event I have attended and made total sense! So many…
Thank you so much for Saturday. It was an inspiring day, especially the evening, and the timing was perfect for me as I get back into writing after my summer break. I felt very lucky to be in the company of so many talented writers, and I thought you did a fabulous job hosting the…
Thank you Emma, for a wonderful experience at the away day and overnight at your stunning home. It is always nice to spend time with writers, but especially like minded creatives out in the deep woods of writing their novels. Both you and your husband were exquisite hosts, taking care of every need. The quality…
Just a quick note to thank you so much for yesterday. It was wonderful to meet you and the workshop was fantastic! I very much enjoyed the exercises and meeting all the other attendees.
The quickest of notes to say ‘thank-you’ for a very enjoyable and very useful session last night. I should also say it was great value for money! I’ve emailed, said the same thing to Emma Darwin, but for you and BPA to initiate, organise, and host such an event is extraordinarily supportive for new writers.…
Frequently Asked Questions
The BPA Away Day for Novelists will be taking place at a private home in Kintbury, West Berkshire.
A full day workshop with writing tutor Emma Darwin will be followed by an informal Q&A with literary agent Charlotte Seymour
Book soon to avoid disappointment. Limited number of early bird prices available.
Overnight accommodation – supper, bed and breakfast available for 5 -7 writers, COVID-19 protocols permitting.
Additional cost: £120 for single occupancy with own bathroom and £100 for double occupancy.
There are limited spaces on site but there are some lovely pubs and guest houses in Kintbury and Inkpen. Contact us for details
We will let you know nearer the time what you need to prepare but in general it might be helpful to have some of your own work printed out. Then just a pen and paper if you want to make notes.
The full day workshop, literary agent Q&A, lunch and afternoon tea. Overnight accommodation – supper, bed and breakfast is an additional charge.
The sessions will not be recorded.
If we can’t go ahead with the event in person we may postpone or reschedule online at a reduced cost. In the event of cancellation full refunds will be given.
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Overnight accommodation – supper, bed and breakfast – COVID-19 protocols permitting.
Cost £100- £120 per person. Limited numbers so please get in touch to book a room
Kintbury village has a train station with hourly trains from London Paddington and Reading. It’s conveniently located off the M4 between junctions 13 & 14.